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A Letter for the Hatter by ~iAes:iconiAes:



I didn't want to fall but I guess I tripped instead
You better watch your feet or else you'll fall and hit your head

Down the darkest rabbit hole I fell into your mind
Decided that I'd look around to see what I could find
It wasn't tea I drank when there, but the potion made me see
You weren't hiding in this club--the party was for me!
Alice Alice Alice let the Chesher say it twice
Being bad is good for you and playing naughty nice
Let him show you why he never lets you really see
He loves you more than life itself--
He loves you more than tea.
©2008-2009 ~iAes
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:iconi-ate-what:
lol :XD: i love it

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Me: Sarcasm is the lowest form of wit
Sally: yeah and like your not sarcastic
Me: was that sarcasim Sally?

hello >>>>> :megaphone:
:iconeye-huntress:
This one is really nice :D

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"The idea always sounds good, but the people usually screw it up"
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Until the day when God shall deign to reveal the future to man, all human wisdom is summed up in these two words,-"Wait and hope".
A. Dumas
:iconunderthebelljar:
Love it, great meter and rhyme scheme and overall form.

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"It's because everything must end, that everything is beautiful."
:iconseveruseprentine:
Mrrr, this is amazing. Alice/Hatter FTW.

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1000 steps down, round and round... one night on the town and I'm hell-bound...
:iconmarauder-92:
Yay! Great. :D It could have easily become cliched, but it isn't, cause there are all these little details that make it original - like the last line - and that's so lovely to see. :heart:

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The man was not wholly evil; he loved flowers [...].
- J. M. Barrie
:iconmattiello:
I agree with everyone else me love. great job!

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If you LOVE it then suggest it to a GM - now!
:iconwrittenwordaddicton:
It's great ^^ Very good constent flowing rhyming. For sure getting a favorite! If you are ever interested in joining a writing club WrittenWordAddicton would be more then happy to have you as a member :D [link]
:iconiaes:
Aw, thank you! What do you like about it?

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